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April Winner of the Loyal Challenge (post May submissions here)

May 1, 2008

And the winner is....................

SAM300467 for SUFFOCATING she submitted alot but this was my fav. Suffocating Im suffocating under Two tons of sorrow. Take me out of my suffering. Just put me to sleep tonight. Because your love never Meant a thing. Razor blades and knives will Never hurt me as much as you did. Strangling myself, Without a breath to take. I may not make it through the night. Next time Think before you Push me down, Because you’ll be sorry When you become The cause of my death.
Thanks to LOYALFREAKGURL13 for submitting her amazing entry and I would love to see more participants next time. You can post your submissions here.

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      Mindfreakwitch
      Female, 28
      Kaiserslautern, DE
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      A mad Poet with lots of Love for her Angel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 2 months ago by Mindfreakwitch

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      Mindfreakwitch
      Female, 28
      Kaiserslautern, DE
      Status
      A mad Poet with lots of Love for her Angel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 2 months ago by Mindfreakwitch

      Always my Angel

      Always my amber eyed Angel I will follow your way Up to every star at night. And I would listen to every word you say Because your words have might.

      These words of you spoken with strength Gives me the will to fullfill my dream and I know. If my Angel is here and be with Me I would do it now.

      I will always look up to you because you are the one Send from heaven above to light up my way. You made it that all my sorrows and fears are gone I always see you and I feel you would stay.

      Always

    • Photo of Mindfreakwitch Mindfreakwitch
      Mindfreakwitch
      Female, 28
      Kaiserslautern, DE
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      A mad Poet with lots of Love for her Angel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 2 months ago by Mindfreakwitch

      Angel

      I felt so lonely and scared I saw shadows following me they want me to be hurted I cried so much I’m hardly be able to see

      then an angel came from above with amber eyes brighter than the stars and told the shadows to leave and poof they were gone and left me without any scars.

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      Mindfreakwitch
      Female, 28
      Kaiserslautern, DE
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      A mad Poet with lots of Love for her Angel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 2 months ago by Mindfreakwitch

      Another blingee of mine

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      Mindfreakwitch
      Female, 28
      Kaiserslautern, DE
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      A mad Poet with lots of Love for her Angel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 2 months ago by Mindfreakwitch

      Amber Eyes

      From a heart that’s so often deeply wounded I need the light of your amber eyes for guide to get out of it . I was completely surrounded and that scare me a bit . Because I won't get hurt again

      In my entire life there is so much pain I nearly cry every night . and I am so broken and vain I am so needing a light . as this deep in your amber eyes.

      You are such an Angel to share your amber light with everyone I feel so safe and strong when I see it glow . all the really bad memories are gone and I can feel the confidence in me grow.

    • Photo of Mindfreakwitch Mindfreakwitch
      Mindfreakwitch
      Female, 28
      Kaiserslautern, DE
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      A mad Poet with lots of Love for her Angel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 2 months ago by Mindfreakwitch

      A blingee from me

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      Mindfreakwitch
      Female, 28
      Kaiserslautern, DE
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      A mad Poet with lots of Love for her Angel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 2 months ago by Mindfreakwitch

      From you

      You are my Angel and my star up in heaven above You are like rain on a hot summer day You made me even my love I’m so happy and I don’t walk away From you

      You are like a voice in my mind That talks to me so softly and caring I think you are one – of – a – kind And there is so much I am wishing From you

      You are my light and my guidance and so much more In every dark hour I have You saved me and that’s for sure And from me a heart full of love For you

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      Posted 2 months ago by sam300467

      u can give this a title if u want I'll never make it on my own.

      Please guide me through

      This time because My heart is somewhere else.

      As i lie in bed

      I wonder where ill

      End up next.

      Should i fall asleep tonight

      Or just die?

      My final breath is taken.

      Its hard to feel

      That ill soon be gone.

      And now i have become

      Separated from all the others.